brandi milton

John Milton Such notes as, warbled to the string, Drew iron tears down Pluto's cheek. And made hell grant what love did seek. -- John Milton Such notes as, warbled to the string, Drew iron tears down Pluto's cheek. And made hell grant what love did seek. -- John Milton Such notes as, warbled to the string, Drew iron tears down Pluto's cheek. And made hell grant what love did seek. -- John Milton Such notes as, warbled to the string, Drew iron tears down Pluto's cheek. And made hell grant what love did seek. -- John Milton v

This is very well written. In fact, it's pretty amazing how you manage to make me hate Brandi yet feel sympathy for her at the same time, and that's just one example. I'm not sure it belongs in Romance, but I trust that you will get there eventually.

At chapter 30 and the schizophrenic author still cannot decide on the name of his MC always fluctuating between Milton and Vernon. Please learn how to be decisive and stick to one name …………………………………………………………………………….

For books are not absolutely dead things, but do contain a potency of life in them to be as active as that soul was whose progeny they are; nay, they do preserve as in a vial the purest efficacy and extraction of that living intellect that bred them. John Milton, Areopagitica

A shameless review, I know. Well, I certainly suck at writing, which I am quite upset about but I do like my story a bit and the updating stability is not good either! I did come here with high hopes on improving since this is my first novels so I atleast hope to make it decent story with decent characters and a cool world. Whether or not you should read it is up to you. I could tell you a bit of the story I planned to shape this into, it's about the adventures of the European guy called Arthur, he makes frienda and enemies along the way, grows stronger physically and mentally, learns about the world. Pretty basic stuff for a story, indeed. The monsters are from all sorts of myths and I planned to add my own versions or my own creations of monsters. Show how big the world and how different each monster is from the other but also quite similar to humans. The writing quality in first chapter is bad and does improve shortly after bit by bit, or so I think. The chapters are unusually long, average being 3k and chapter 4 being 6661 words. I got a little too into it. Be free to use your imagination, I honestly have not even started the actual plot I have planned as of now, I was thinking of rewriting it from the scratch to improve the quality and also plan more for the story. While I suppose the adventure is rather enjoyable at times but also had few dark elements into it. Perhaps I can improve my foreshadowing skills, eh. If you feel generous to read it and give me advice, feel free to :D, I put my discord on my profile. If you do wish to know more about the story to decide whether or not you should even stay for the writing to improve, I can tell you about the future, only a bit, of course. Each character does have a reason for what they do. Arthur is a blank canvas which paints itself as the story goes on. I'm not lying, I have not even fully decided his personality when I made the story using a word in a story game. Milton is my favourite, you'll know why. Anyhoo, have a good day and good life. Penguin 🐧