the cerulean

Good chapter i like how you got the mc to hire a fighting expert to help you with the machop. also do you mean cerulean instead of celedon becasue celedon is four gym.

i remember this story. stopped reading when it became too much about sex. though it was also because apparantly he bagged sabrina and like 20 women from cerulean city. also the translation was poor where i was reading it first. this is better though in translation atleast. the idea though is quite good.

the story progression is really really slow, even for a chinese ff, it's still slow. 500 chap and we're still in cerulean gym. tmqhe title of this fanfic doesn't fit the story because he's really not much different from the anime ash except for thr fact that he knows the storyline.

I like what the author is doing so far. The fact that legendaries are being treated as forces of nature instead of their anime representation is good. However, to me it falls short in the character building of the MC despite it being a fresh take on the cerulean gym Water flower fam. I dunno it just feels too open ended on the MC's journey to the indigo league. But otherwise it is good to read.