learning to spell zucchini

The main charater is braindead, the progression of the novel is trash with him learning a bronze teir spell and destroying a house. His family is all dumb with a father that only cares about making more children.

You need to learn grammar and spell check it it hurts my eyes looking how sloppy this work is go **** yourself your not qualified to write. Go back learning basic and importantly your words are **** like heavey what the **** is that spelling .

I don't know if its just me but I don't like how magic learning is systematic learning. Everyone learns the same spells and you have to "cultivate" to learn spells. I would like it much more if there were some creativity involved with the spells. I've seen this exact fireball spell almost 10 times in 10 different novels by now.

It really good and he not strong immediately you could say that above not acting his age and increased learning ability there it not much special about him but that’s is what makes it interesting he trains fro months to learn a spell and increase it potential

It is good learning about different types of magic and other things but he have slow down to really understand what is doing and not to share every spell he learnt fairy tail have a lot of people who envy him he have to have control