the wolverine movie

If I'm being honest, the plot holes are massive. One moment the characters are saying or doing something and by the time you get the next sentence its being contradicted by something else. It's a decent fic if you can get past the writing and weird personalitys. Also for some reason everyone believes the MC, which is X-34 or whatever clone of wolverine from the movie Logan, which looks like wolverine in his 200s, is 15 or 16 for some reason. Does a guy who looks to be 40 really gonna seem 16 to people?

I dropped it on the evil Wolverine 🤣🤣🤣 ........................................................................................................................................................................................

The type of system is dragging the story down. So many powers appearing out of nowhere make it pointless to have any real character development. The relationships between the characters are very nonsensical. Too many time jumps. I find this fanfic amusing; I compare it to the Deadpool and Wolverine movie. Funny, but full of nonsensical things and plot holes.

Everything was just fine and all until the author decided to have Mc get beaten up by Wolverine while possessing Ch-24 and not to mention NZT which is supposed to give Mc a huge advantage against Wolverine. The fight scene with Wolverine is too generic and anime-like, how can Wolverine disappear in his vision and suddenly appear in front of him like some generic anime fight scene. In the movies and even the comics, Wolverine is NOT that fast to suddenly disappear and appear. And here I thought I finally found a good Marvel fanfic. I know mistakes are inevitable and no one is perfect but from what I just read, this is clearly not a mistake and the author wrote the fight scene with purpose probably just to give the Mc character development. Anyways, this is my honest review, I wish you luck with your fanfic author-san.