hector barbossa

It's a good story. The author respected canon by including seemingly unimportant characters like Golden Woonan, Ibadonbo, Naguri, and others. References to characters like Jack Sparrow, Hector Barbossa, Calypso, and Davy Jones are also well-done, making it easier to form character images. It's worth noting that many things don't align with canon, but this can be attributed to the author writing the story when the details weren't yet known—but I think it's even better that way. The story is unusual and captivating; it's the same One Piece we know, but at the same time, it's different, telling a unique story.

usually don't do reviews but felt like sharing my thoughts here. story is really good, feels grounded in reality. many fanfics have a tunnel vision focused on the MC; it feels like the world outside of the MC (or whoever's POV) is frozen and only becomes active when they become relevant to the MC. the main character is definitely Hector, most of the time we are following him, his thoughts and actions, but we also get enough of other characters to understand that everything is in constant flux irrespective of Hector. another good point of this story is that we often get to see the wider influence of Hector's actions. it feels more natural that way, instead of being directly told by the author/narrator. also, the majority of the characters are well-developed and form a good feedback loop of interactions with Hector. every character has something they offer for Hector's growth as a character while not sacrificing their individuality or personality, and they in turn also grow with Hector. this is especially in the case of the core circle of summons, but still applies to other side characters too; nobody is badly ignored. the updates come slowly, but chapters are very content-packed and filling. not like some other fanfics that have <1k word chapters that you can read in a minute or less.

Hey, I want you to answer a question for me: did you know that Pandora is actually Echidna's mother, and that Echidna's father is Hector, the Warlock of Melancholy?

seru thor ceritanya ! kayanya ali lbh cocok buat mikha. and hector buat Kozikhna . dannn. ..Authornya lebih cocok untukku. ..he. .he. .he. .he. . di tunggu updatenya yach. .😉