The cold villain boss begged me to hug him after he became popular
1. The new idol, Si Mo, was just like his name. He was decisive and cold to others, but his good looks attracted countless girls to join him, but none of them succeeded.
Everyone knew that Si Mo didn't like to wear jewelry and didn't even have a watch on his wrist. At the award ceremony, they found out that the big boss was wearing a red braid on his right wrist.
" Why?" When he asked about the reason, the corners of his lips curled up slightly. His eyes were gentle and filled with pride." My wife made it up for me." From then on, the red rope never left his hand.
2. Yu Qian Qian had decided to stay away from the original male protagonist the very same day she got into the role of Gu Zao Ba Zong Wen's female supporting role. She had looks and money, so why should she still be a female supporting role until she met Si Mo?
She had been practicing dancing since she was young and had performed abroad on behalf of the country many times. She was the goddess in the hearts of countless netizens, but she was willing to retire for the original male lead.
In the dead of the night, Si Mo touched her slender waist. He looked at her standing on the stage and said regretfully," It would be great if I could see you dance with my own eyes."
Hence, she put on her dance costume, stood on the stage, and performed another court dance.
"Why did you suddenly want to participate in this program?" asked the host.
The fairy stood on the stage and showed the engagement ring generously.
Feng Qing Nian
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Bem, lá vai algumas opiniões. Como leitor, é normal perceber que as coisas possuem uma certa linha a seguir, ainda mais no gênero fanfiction. MAS, tem coisas que se repetem, repetem, repetem... ATÉ DEMAIS! Como por exemplo, cada vez que algum personagem é mencionado, NÃO é necessário O NOME COMPLETO da criatura! TODOS sabem quem os referidos São! Todos conhecem o personagem, até melhor que eles mesmos! (bem, a maioria suponho). Repetir o nome completo é o cúmulo da irritação, ainda mais em uma história bem escrita. Sim, É BEM ESCRITA, e olha que sou crítico ao máximo por causa do sistema e harém (tags que Odeio) mas em determinadas histórias, ficam bem! Outro exemplo, específico nas fics de BNHA: MOMO. Mano, TODAS, repito TODAS! as fics que ja li, é sempre, SEMPRE ela que aparece com o mc. Sério que (desculpe a sinceridade) a falta de criatividade em colocar uma outra personagem feminina é tamanha que, só optam por uma? Acho que existem muitas outras garotas na turma 1-A, quem dirá na UA em si. Bem, no demais, gramática boa, escrita boa.