hokazono iroha

Iroha best girl. Best Iroha fic I've ever read but It has way too much smut for my liking. Side characters are well written and the progression is good too. Not a big fan of smut but maybe other readers will like more because of the smut.

Hmm the novel was pretty interesting and a fun read up until the worst girl's arc, iroha, listen you do whatever you want it's your novel after all, buy my god is it a chore to read anything related to iroha, she's boring, her arc was insanely forced and also unsatisfying (checked google and her design is pretty forgettable aswell), and then there's the absolute annihilation of Hitori's character, what's up with simulation novel writers and the bocchi? why even put her in your novels if you're going to remake her entire personality and behaviour? by chapter 300 Hitori is just a shell of a character! and don't get me started with the whole mira stuff. Also, the systems barely get any use, the love system is so bad it became comic relief with less appearances than dark wing the pet crow. Why am i dropping it? the whole coincidental chain of events killed my hype, it wasn't what i expected to read by chapter 300, not a fan of fake tension either, and also the mc is too much of a beta and can't be honest with the girls around him even if his life depended on it, it was fun while it lasted.

very early for the fic review but till 21 chapters, it was pretty good. for once we see yui be part of anhs for the oregairu crossover coz its always yukino or haruno and sometime iroha. yui never gets any recognition smh. The story is in very early stage, few days have passed and 8man just in the latest chapter has started to find the rules of the school. 8man also has backstory which resulted in him already knowing kushida and kei which is interesting, they have a decent dynamic and its most definitely harem. hachiman in this fic is not overly on the nose about saying one thing and doing another. But then again it might be because its too early so there hasnt been a real situation for this. Tho yukino trying to create service club in anhs is funny with the way the school is set, doing charity work like that isnt the brightest idea. While th3 author has said ayanokoji and horikita are present, they havent been introduced yet, it would be interesting with yukino and horikita interact xd Overall give it a try. its nice read.

overall a great cotexoregairu ff if you look past the hate b*ner the actual author of the series have for the teacher, sister, yui, yukishonita. this is truly hikigaya ero life, tho there are no actual lemons but just mention what happens. some of the plays that happens are lesb play in threes*mes, reverse ra*e play, pet play, s and m play, handholding, forehead kiss, to name some of the top of my head. hikigaya is basically a self centered guy who picks on small fry to exploit private points. he does really love his three girlfriends and would lose his cool if someone mess with them tho he is not stupid and throughly plans his moves to do maximum exploitation and even expel students. this is one of the very few fanfics of cote which actually completed the entire first year and is already in second year before author stops the fanfic. harem: hiyori, arisu, masumi, chiaki (segs friend),2nd year arc hinted harem [iroha (junior 1-c leader, oregairu character), nanase (junior 1-d), amasawa (junior 1-a) and kiryuin (senior 3-b, hinted in a premonition)]. if the fanfic ever gets a true ending, it will be polygamy agreed upon by the 3 lovers from the start and he even got an ok from arisu's dad.

I just finished reading My SAO Adventure Is Wrong, As Expected, and I’m honestly still laughing. Dropping Hachiman Hikigaya into Sword Art Online with no exit button and a beginner’s sword—is such a chaotic, brilliant setup. The way you’ve blended the dry wit of My Teen Romantic Comedy SNAFU with the high-stakes absurdity of SAO is pure entertainment. And the relationship drama? Yukino, Yui, Asuna, Iroha, Haruno all circling poor Hachiman like it’s a battlefield of love. That café scene had me wheezing. I’m a longtime fan of web fiction and also work as a commissioned comic artist, so while reading, I kept picturing how this story would look in comic form. The contrast between Hachiman’s deadpan reactions and the emotional chaos around him would be hilarious to capture visually especially with the expressive, over-the-top moments you’ve written so well. If the idea of seeing this world illustrated ever crosses your mind, I’d be thrilled to talk about the possibility of working with you. I love bringing stories like this to life ones that balance humor, heart, and a touch of madness. You can reach me anytime at [email protected], or find me on Instagram (@lunaartsoul), Discord (lunapuresoul), and Twitter/X (@lunaartsoul). Always happy to chat stories, art, or anything in between.