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2026-05-11

I usually love chaos gacha fanfics but this one feels WAY too rushed. The MC gets gacha, gets himself run over, heals, learns Japanese, enrolls in high school (by passing exams), and then suddenly becomes the center of attention at school all in like 2-3 days... This is also happening when the MC just appeared in Japan with no legal documents or identity. The author does not take time to let the MC get his legal situation get sorted out before rushing to enroll him in a school (which shouldn't be possible without legal documents). The author has also not bothered to give him a last name or bothered to show the MC's personality or background/history before throwing him into the Oregairu canon. Not to mention, the MC himself despite having a lot of other options, decides on the same day he is released from the hospital to go and involve himself in underground fights so he can make money using his powers... Like bro, it has not even been a week since he transmigrated, he has no need for money since he is staying with Shizuka, he has no legal papers, and has a lot of ways to gain money properly especially if he waits for the gacha to give him some sort of high tech power... Why is he in such a rush to involve himself in something illegal without even settling down first? The fic also seems to be heavily influenced by chinese fics in the sense that as soon as the MC is introduced, he is the immediate center of attention where everyone can't stop talking about him, women are going crazy over him, and boys immediately see him as a threat... This is all without the MC getting a gacha draw that improves his appearance. All he has is the Charming Smile trait (a common trait) which should not get him that level of attention. Let's not skip the fact that Saika (the femboy on the cover), suddenly sees him as a hero as soon as he sees him and the MC is going straight for that romance route for no reason at all.... Another plot hole is that apparently he is built like a 25 year old professional body builder while apparently being 16 years old. Again, he did not get a gacha draw for this, he just spawns like that and the author just skirts over the fact. Overall, the idea has potential but the author really needs to work on the pacing and plot...

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