jounin konoha

Man what the hell get your facts checked , youngest jounin was kakashi. Man what the hell get your facts checked , youngest jounin was kakashi. Man what the hell get your facts checked , youngest jounin was kakashi. Man what the hell get your facts checked , youngest jounin was kakashi. Man what the hell get your facts checked , youngest jounin was kakashi. Man what the hell get your facts checked , youngest jounin was kakashi.

The quality of the writing is quite good considering the perspective of other works. So far the book has a decent development of the story in the framework of the events that happens but I would like you to be careful with the chronological times and bring your book as close to reality as possible so that later on, a younger child does not come out. At 10 years, have the strength of a chunin or jounin which would be ridiculous. The downside here is the poor stability of the chapter updates. It is quite innovative that in the world that you decided to make the book, it was not born in some main character or with some bloodline in Konoha or, failing that, born in Konoha. It seems to me similar to an innovation that exists in this platform where the protagonist is born in the village of the rock.

man thats some bs. Kushina and minato survive the day of narutos birth only to get killed by some random rogue ninjas that somehow in a large group infiltrated konoha. I'm not sure the author has any idea of naruto otherwise he would have known that you can't kill minato, the yellow flash by throwing some f***ing shuriken and kushina too she might have lost the ninetails but she is still an uzumaki and a jounin as well. no anbus in sight.

Literally an over rated chinese novel with errors every where both in grammer and in basic story and plot like how do you train Yin Yang release while running with a whole squad after fighting for a bit with a jounin and special jounin and thats just a little bit of how wack this is

The writing quality is great, and the story attempts to create a realistic Naruto world—quite dark in tone. However, it feels a bit absurd. If this is a self-insert, it’s unrealistic that someone with knowledge from our world, even after extensive training (as the author described), would be on the same level as orphaned shinobi. Every genius in Naruto was intelligent and had knowledge that allowed them to train to an exceptional level. So, within the logic of a self-insert, it doesn’t make sense for the protagonist to be this weak. I managed to read up to chapter 33, but unfortunately, there are too many unrealistic and frustrating elements, such as: Juro the jounin—infuses a kunai with fire chakra (which would realistically melt the metal; only wind or lightning chakra could be used this way). Juro the jounin—only activates the Sharingan when he’s about to lose and is already exhausted, which is completely unrealistic. And even then, he almost loses. The journey to Konoha—enemies deep within the Land of Fire (highly unrealistic and illogical). Before entering Konoha—an Uchiha begs to be let in. That’s so improbable it’s laughable. Sadly, there are far too many unrealistic and silly elements. The writing quality is good, but reading it makes you want to slam your head against the floor.