asia dxd

Good DxD, don't drop having freed as the MC is rare so rare that I anything aside from this, I like how the can suppress his urge to play Asia. I hope he will add Raynare into the harem.

Good Novel so far, hope that damn Issei get killed for good, I don't really like him. Also, Asia for the harem plz Also, Asia for the harem plz Also, Asia for the harem plz Also, Asia for the harem plz Also, Asia for the harem plz Also, Asia for the harem plz Also, Asia for the harem plz Also, Asia for the harem plz Also, Asia for the harem plz

excellent story, I like how you develop the character (Ace for the victory), I can not wait to see the chaos that will cause, especially with the bleach and dxd arcs, as well as those of Testament, I hope you give him the Mera Mera no My as lodge, I mean Ace would not be complete if he does not have it, especially to see the reaction of the phenex clan to the power of said fruit hahahaha, in my opinion for the harem you should choose Lisa (bleach), Mio (testament), maria, (testament), yuki (testament), kurumi (testament), Asia (dxd), irina (dxd), Le fay Pendragon (dxd ), Chisato (testament), Ingvild, Xenovia, Ravel, and rosseweisse.

You never finished watching Anime? Here is my advice never write Dxd story by using Dxd anime as reference, Because unlike in light novel, dxd version anime ruin a lot of characters, especially Issei's characters hard to the point that reduce him into fanservice machine, for example, the scene in which Issei pervs on Asia's panties, which appears in the anime, is not exist in the light novel. Their first meeting is portrayed in a much more poetic manner in the light novel. He also never perv on Raynare when she is killing him in light novel too

story base is good but for a hentai style fanfic it's pretty lame. he doesn't get with any of dxd hot girls , only gets Asia who is a washboard and not the attractive and much younger than him. seeing everyone else get the girls he could have had its just frustrating