gaara vs deidara

After Deidara defeated Gaara in combat and took him to Akatsuki's lair in the Land of Rivers, Shukaku was forcefully extracted from Gaara and placed within the Demonic Statue of the Outer Path

If you want my overall assessment. From the plot, the first few paces is okay, I see the potential. But later in the story I see a lot of weird plot. I forgot, but there is. But Fifth Great Shinobi World War was great, there is some improvement there. Though, idk if you leave it on purpose but I notice you wrote Gaara to remember Deidara who capture him in the future arc while in this fanfic it was Sasuke.

mc is in the body of deidara and is 90% like deidara you will never know we are reading story of someone else in deidara body and than you get hit by the deidara was kind and didnt want civilian casualties thats why he took the tailed beast away. also whoever wrote this seems to have minimal information about naruto even deidara's age when he joined akatsuki is wrong overall a disappointment you cant say the mc is someone else not deidara then have him act 100% like deidara but change his ruthlessness into being a kind saint who is worried about civilians dying during his fight.

Good story, but you really need to decide what kind of Gaara you're writing. Are you writing the killer Gaara (canon), schizophrenic(current), kind Gaara, friendly gaara, just pick one please stop from switching between arrogant and fanboy gaara. Other than that can't wait for the next chapter.

this story starts very well. Often in the fanfictions on Gaara, the authors forget the psychological aspect of Gaara, and what the village of Gaara thinks. the only advice I will give is that the tailed beast even if she accepts that Gaara sleeps, she must not become his friend quickly because it is too easy. I really like the family aspect of Gaara