Lady Xian Fei
There's a half-blind mother above, and a baby brother waiting to be fed below
As the pillar of the family, Lin Huangjiu expressed that he didn't want to enter an immortal sect and achieve great success.
I hope that everything will go smoothly in the family, harvest wheat in spring and rice in autumn, and occasionally brew fruit wine and eat meat.
Just as the days were going smoothly in the direction that he was satisfied with, God wanted to interfere.
Smash the Peerless Codex on her head…
After three seconds of silence, Lin Huangjiu put the Codex into his pocket.
He also expressed that since even the heavens could not bear to see his unambitious appearance, then he would show it!
Demon King Rong Su had just taken over, she was beautiful and wild, and she liked to eat food that was based on her taste, such as…
The newly born rabbit cub from the opposite side, the level 8 Silver Flood Dragon of the East Sea, and the level 9 White Sword Tiger in the depths of the Azure Billow Forest…
He had committed too many sins. If he wasn't careful, he would be attacked by a group of insects. It was too troublesome to deal with the insects. He planned to tear the space and sneak away. However, he didn't expect to step into the space fragment. Not only was he heavily injured, but he also fell unconscious.
When she woke up, she was a smooth egg.
What made his teeth ache the most was that he, who had turned into an egg, smashed into a little girl's head and almost became the raw material for the green pepper scrambled egg!
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Au début tout aller bien, sauf qu'au fur et à mesure... l'IA à malheuresement pris trop de place. Je ne parle pas de l'utiliser pour la relecture et la correction, mais pour tout le reste. On le ressent dans les phrase de cloture de chapitre - cet effet mecanique et creux. On le ressent dans les dialogues froid et impersonnel - chaque personnage devrait avoir ça façon de parler en fonction de sa personnalité et son age. De plus, les pensées du personne devienne de plus en plus étrange. Comment peut-il savoir des choses qui n'ont jamais été expliquer ? Comment s'est-il qu'il y a un passif entre la famille Voss et la sienne ? d'ou ça sort ? comment s'est-il que tout ceux réunis dans cette classe sont des Seigneur ?