critiques et avis sur la bd ailefroide

Super Docteur Insensé de la Déesse

"Coquin, je vais sortir pour faire quelque chose, donc je ne peux plus m'occuper de toi. Tu peux descendre de la montagne et t'amuser. Mais si tu ne trouves pas quelqu'un qui correspond à ton Corps Inné Pure Yang en trois ans, tu es fini!" Ce sont les derniers mots que l'ancien, qui était le professeur de Yang Luo, lui jeta avant de disparaître. Pendant ce temps, ayant maîtrisé la plupart des compétences de son maître, Yang Luo descendit de la montagne et fit son premier pas dans la civilisation pour la première fois en des années. Avec ses compétences médicales et ses arts martiaux inégalés, il se lance dans un voyage, se liant d'amitié avec de nouveaux alliés et écrasant tous les ennemis qui se dressent sur son chemin, alors qu'il tente de résoudre sa constitution de Corps Inné Pure Yang, et de cultiver jusqu'au sommet du monde!

Shi Nian Ying Huo · Urban

Comerciante de la Evolución Fey

"Un siglo después del Despertar del Espíritu Qi, el mundo entra en una nueva era. Los humanos pueden absorber el Qi espiritual despertado del mundo, lo que les permite seguir un nuevo camino: ¡ocupaciones de Qi espiritual! Simultáneamente, las plantas y los animales del planeta también están evolucionando hacia su línea de ascendencia o desarrollando mutaciones espirituales. —Lin Yuan se da cuenta de que puede ayudar a los feys a evolucionar sin límites y constantemente purificar sus líneas de sangre —comienza con una pequeña tienda de evolución de feys en la Red de Estrellas y se levanta desde allí. —No hay problema que no pueda resolver para entregar las mercancías. Si hay un problema, es porque las mercancías son mejores que las expectativas! —exclama Lin Yuan. ¡Esta es una historia puramente sobre mascotas!"

Amber Button · Eastern

Mme et Monsieur Smith

Ethan Smith marchait dans la rue vide, une cigarette à la bouche, secouant la tête et forçant un sourire amer. Qui aurait pu imaginer qu'après trois ans de mariage, tout ce qui restait était la trahison ? Il jura de faire regretter à cette femme ce qu'elle avait fait et promit de faire en sorte que tous ceux qui avaient été bons avec lui mènent une bonne vie. Oui, c'était Emily Taylor, la femme qui l'avait aidé à sortir de l'abîme du désespoir quand il avait touché le point le plus bas de sa vie. "Emily, il est temps pour moi de m'occuper de toi."

Taibai And A Qin · Urban

Esclavo de la Sombra

Al crecer en la pobreza, Sunny nunca esperó nada bueno de la vida. Sin embargo, ni siquiera él anticipó ser elegido por el Hechizo de Pesadilla y convertirse en uno de los Despiertos, un grupo elite de personas con poderes sobrenaturales. Transportado a un mundo mágico en ruinas, se encontró enfrentando a monstruos terribles, y también a otros Despiertos, en una mortal batalla por sobrevivir. Lo que es peor, el poder divino que recibió resultó tener un pequeño, pero potencialmente fatal efecto secundario... Discord: https://discord.gg/NpDgaxRA6Y

Guiltythree · Fantasy

Doctor Divino Urbano Desciende la Montaña

``` —Lin Dong, quien ha dominado tanto las artes médicas divinas como las artes marciales, ha viajado de la montaña a la ciudad. Con artes médicas divinas en su mano izquierda e invencibles artes marciales en su derecha, deambula libremente por la ciudad. ```

I'm the little miracle doctor · Urban

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