Ke Xue: Fake wine mixed with Crayon Shinchan
[Description: If betraying and hurting a person can absorb the other party's " Health Points ", what would you choose?]
[Health Points Absorption Formula: Target's remaining Health Points * Affinity %* Damage %]
Makoto Koyama, who had just transmigrated and had already entered the countdown, pondered over this question and formula. Then, he decisively opened his avatar and plunged into the darkness.
[Makoto Koyama: As long as the target is a bad person, then I am a good person!] Cough, survival was not shabby!
Therefore, many years later, a bottle of fake wine appeared in the winery, which was used to gain the favor of the members of the winery but secretly backstabbed them.
A bottle of fake wine named Nikolaschka.
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"Vodka, this game is over." But now we need to enjoy another game, a game of cat and mouse."
After saying that, Gin grinned. His cold and sharp gaze swept across the group of backbone of the winery and finally fixed on the rye whiskey.
Akai Shuichi:
"Big Brother, you mean…"
Under Vodka's shocked expression, Makoto Koyama, who had betrayed Akai Shuichi after experiencing a crisis of trust in the Gin, chuckled in his heart.
P.S. Comic manga was more of a daily comedy.
Keyword: Conan, ReLIfe Return to 17, Crayon Shin-chan, Azure Sea.
Dumb, Cute, Lazy Fish
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Le roman se distingue par sa montée en puissance progressive : les premiers chapitres posent une base intrigante, mais c’est surtout à partir des révélations intermédiaires que l’histoire prend une vraie ampleur. Certaines scènes clés marquent par leur tension et leurs implications métaphysiques, donnant au récit une identité forte. Le duo de personnages fonctionne bien, avec des dynamiques crédibles et une évolution perceptible. L’écriture gagnerait parfois à être plus épurée dans les phases de transition, mais la cohérence du monde, la logique interne des pouvoirs et les enjeux posés compensent largement. Un projet ambitieux qui montre clairement où il veut aller.