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On the way home from school, Ling Xiaowen had been a hero and taught three bad kids a lesson for bullying a " dwarf." In order to repay Ling Xiaowen's kindness, the " dwarf " secretly followed Ling Xiaowen and gave him a " Universal God Ball."
It turned out that this " dwarf " was the grandson of the famous great inventor, Tesla, a hundred years ago. When Tesla passed away, aliens stole his brain cells, revived him with high-tech means to serve them, and strictly guarded him from leaving the country. However, he was still concerned about Earth, so he asked his grandson to secretly " descend " to give his treasure to a " good person " on Earth, hoping that he would understand the truth while " playing " and contribute to the advancement of human science and technology.
This " God Ball " was known as the Lightning Fireball by the people on Earth. It was a mysterious product of nature. Other than Tesla, no one could successfully make it.
From then on, Ling Xiaowen and the God Ball were inseparable. They " played " with the fun of their teenage years and the wonderful and unimaginable stories of their growth.
Je veut pas paraître méchant, mais de mon point de vue tu bourre beaucoup trop les statistiques, ça prend beaucoup trop de place dans le chapitre. Je trouve aussi que le côté "gamer" se perds dans tout ces ajouts, le principal atout de cet atout est de pouvoir créer des compétence naturellement avec une certaine facilité. Enfin vis à vis de la grammaire qui pique les yeux mais personne n'est pa***it et le français est loin d'être ******, je te conseille d'utiliser un correcteur qui te souligne s'il y a de potentielles erreurs. Voilà je voulais juste te donner un petit avis comme ça, ceci mis à part un "gamer" dans du dxd peut être très intéressant, reste à voir à quel vitesse tu fera évoluer le personnage car la série est relativement courte.