Cold smoke in the past life, warm in this life
She said,
In the past, I was afraid to go out and always lay flat at home. She just wanted to read the story to fill her brain with love. Therefore, she was a famous idiot in the capital in her previous life. It became a joke after a meal. She thought that she had met the perfect match in the story, but she did not expect that it was because she was stupid that that person decided to marry her as a cover. In the end, he died under the war.
He said,
Ever since he was young, he dreamed of becoming a general like his father. gallop on the battlefield to protect the country. Therefore, he had been practicing martial arts since he was young and was not afraid of the cold and heat. At the age of eleven, he could follow his father to wipe out the mountain bandits and wipe out the bandits. However, when he was 12 years old, he fell off a horse and lost control of his legs. His childhood dream could no longer be realized.
In this life, she did not believe in love. Who knew what kind of monster she would marry in the future? She just had to focus on her career and protect the people in her own land.
He only wanted to lie flat for the rest of his life. After all, a cripple couldn't do anything big. But why was this woman always chasing after him, saying that she would help him fulfill his dreams? Is this how you repay a life saving grace?
Un début bien réussi. J'aime beaucoup l'idée des modèles dans Harry Potter (pour changer des Barbe Blanche, Shanks le roux, Madara Uchiha ...). Les pouvoirs du MC seront tous de la magie ? Les modèles ne seront que dans Harry Potter, ou peut-il aussi avoir de la magie d'autres œuvres (magie du seigneur des anneaux, magie élémentaire...). Le MC a une bonne personnalité qui correspond à Cédric Grégory (un surprenant mais premier modèle). L'histoire avance avec un rythme calme, MC pas trop op au début ... Juste une question, le MC peut-il cumulé les modèles ? Et est-il obligé de changer d'apparence à chaque fois ? Je préfère que le MC n'a pas besoin de changé d'apparence et cumule simplement les pouvoirs des différents modèles, je trouve que c'est plus logique, compréhensible et mieux pour l'histoire. Cependant l'auteur fait ce qu'il veut car c'est son oeuvre.