The Rebirth of a Concubine's Daughter
Ling Yinke was the daughter of Huang Shang, the wealthiest man in the Great Chen Kingdom.
Her stepmother's framing caused her mother to run into a pillar and die with her unborn brother. She fell from being a proud son of heaven to the clouds.
Her father's neglect had made it difficult for her to move forward and she had suffered.
His bloodline was noble, but he was in the same boat as her. He told her,"Ah Ke, I will never betray you!"
She had helped him become the most respected person in the world, but after he ascended to that noble position, she had been ruthlessly stabbed by him!
She gritted her teeth in hatred, but she was helpless. She did not want the heavens to drop a curtain and let her live again.
When one's life was restarted, everything was confusing.
The noblest man in the Great Chen Kingdom frequently appeared in her line of sight.
He crossed mountains and ridges just to let her gain her father's appreciation, he sent her gold and silver just to solve her urgent needs, he taught her the way of being a person, taught her the method of disciplining others, she was confused and confused;
Love, hate, love, hatred, past life, this life, which one was real?
Au début tout aller bien, sauf qu'au fur et à mesure... l'IA à malheuresement pris trop de place. Je ne parle pas de l'utiliser pour la relecture et la correction, mais pour tout le reste. On le ressent dans les phrase de cloture de chapitre - cet effet mecanique et creux. On le ressent dans les dialogues froid et impersonnel - chaque personnage devrait avoir ça façon de parler en fonction de sa personnalité et son age. De plus, les pensées du personne devienne de plus en plus étrange. Comment peut-il savoir des choses qui n'ont jamais été expliquer ? Comment s'est-il qu'il y a un passif entre la famille Voss et la sienne ? d'ou ça sort ? comment s'est-il que tout ceux réunis dans cette classe sont des Seigneur ?