Rebuilding Cybertron in the Marvel World
After transmigrating to the Marvel Universe, everyone else was a sword immortal or mage, but why did he become a tinder?
Other players were role-playing, leveling up and fighting monsters, but why was he in the nurturing category…
Ronan looked at the respectful Megatron in front of him, then looked at the other side of him, at the other side of him, at the same time, at the other side of him, at the other side of him, at the same time, at the other side of him, at the other side of him, at the same time, at the other side of him, at the other side
These big guys…shouldn't burn oil, right?
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P.S. What was the most amazing thing about Transformers?
Steel Armored Dragon? Commander Meng? Universe Thearch?
No, it was their technology and civilization! Phase Shifter, Space Bridge, Star Destroyer…
Extinguish, sun! Please become my superpower!
Wait, this sun seems to belong to Earth…
Shocked, could it be that I'm a villain?
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P.S.: The plot of this work will mainly be based on the Avengers movie series. It will not involve mutants, Daredevil, the Fantastic Four, The Defenders, the League of Lost Children, etc. It will only involve the first film of Agents of S.H.I.E.L.D.
The second half of " Towards the Galaxy " might involve the comics and leave a hole for the next phase of the Avengers.
Everything was about avengers.
carried her backpack
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Alors je vais justifier mes notations dans l'ordre : Qualité de l'écriture : 2/5. Beaucoup de fautes d'orthographe, vocabulaire trop souvent familier. Malgré tout, de bonnes améliorations au niveau du vocabulaire au fil des chapitres, qui reste malgré tout insuffisant. Toujours autant de fautes d'orthographe (oui, c'est très gênant lorsqu'on lit un roman !) Développement de l'histoire 4/5 : ennuyant à mourir les 10/12 premiers chapitres (subjectif), mais très agréable à lire par la suite. Character design 3/5 : il y a un effort facilement remarquable, mais les personnalités sont trop poussées au cliché , et parfois trop niaise. Certaines réactions ne sont pas logiques. Stabilité du rythme de sortie des chapitres,2/5 : mauvaise pour les derniers chapitres. World background 4/5 : tous les éléments dun univers fantasy sont présents, avec quelques +. Roman moyen dans l'ensemble, mais à bon potentiel. En attente de la suite.