Uncle, I want to marry you
Gu Ruan's life was very simple. Other than attending classes, she studied food every day.
The first time she saw Mu Sinian, Gu Ruan was holding a kitchen knife in her hand. She looked at him in confusion." Uncle, who are you looking for?"
Uncle? No one had ever dared to call Mu Sinian that. He frowned." Take shelter from the rain."
After that…
"Little one, is 1,000 yuan enough for one night?" asked Mu Sinian.
When everyone heard this, they were dumbfounded.
" Don't get me wrong," Gu Ruan hurriedly explained." He said cooking. Cooking."
Everyone was even more surprised.
Seeing that the misunderstanding had deepened, Gu Ruan felt as if six dots had flown past her head. She caught a glimpse of a certain someone who was trying to hold back his laughter and immediately became angry." Uncle, your body isn't in good condition. Don't make trouble at night."
Hearing this, a certain uncle's face was filled with black lines.
At night, Mu Sinian threw Gu Ruan onto the bed." Little thing, I'll let you test my body now."
……
That day, it was raining heavily, and I knew that I fell in love with you at first sight!
It might only take a moment to like someone!
Au début tout aller bien, sauf qu'au fur et à mesure... l'IA à malheuresement pris trop de place. Je ne parle pas de l'utiliser pour la relecture et la correction, mais pour tout le reste. On le ressent dans les phrase de cloture de chapitre - cet effet mecanique et creux. On le ressent dans les dialogues froid et impersonnel - chaque personnage devrait avoir ça façon de parler en fonction de sa personnalité et son age. De plus, les pensées du personne devienne de plus en plus étrange. Comment peut-il savoir des choses qui n'ont jamais été expliquer ? Comment s'est-il qu'il y a un passif entre la famille Voss et la sienne ? d'ou ça sort ? comment s'est-il que tout ceux réunis dans cette classe sont des Seigneur ?