Ke Xue: Fake wine mixed with Crayon Shinchan
[Description: If betraying and hurting a person can absorb the other party's " Health Points ", what would you choose?]
[Health Points Absorption Formula: Target's remaining Health Points * Affinity %* Damage %]
Makoto Koyama, who had just transmigrated and had already entered the countdown, pondered over this question and formula. Then, he decisively opened his avatar and plunged into the darkness.
[Makoto Koyama: As long as the target is a bad person, then I am a good person!] Cough, survival was not shabby!
Therefore, many years later, a bottle of fake wine appeared in the winery, which was used to gain the favor of the members of the winery but secretly backstabbed them.
A bottle of fake wine named Nikolaschka.
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"Vodka, this game is over." But now we need to enjoy another game, a game of cat and mouse."
After saying that, Gin grinned. His cold and sharp gaze swept across the group of backbone of the winery and finally fixed on the rye whiskey.
Akai Shuichi:
"Big Brother, you mean…"
Under Vodka's shocked expression, Makoto Koyama, who had betrayed Akai Shuichi after experiencing a crisis of trust in the Gin, chuckled in his heart.
P.S. Comic manga was more of a daily comedy.
Keyword: Conan, ReLIfe Return to 17, Crayon Shin-chan, Azure Sea.
Dumb, Cute, Lazy Fish
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Mi crítica a esta novela va más por el lado de la edición que de la trama, aunque en realidad sería error del autor. El autor abusa de los signos como este _________ hasta el hartazgo. Parece que cada capítulo tiene que tener. En papel quizá pasa desapercibido, pero en audiolibro es un suplicio. El bot las lee bien, pero la repetición constante de ese sonido cortante hace que sea molesto y hasta cansado de escuchar. Hay personas que estamos haciendo otras cosas (cocinando, trabajando) y no podemos estar todo el tiempo leyendo, por eso usamos el audiolibro. Pero con esa repetidera, en lugar de disfrutar la historia, terminas desconcentrándote o frustrándote. El narrador artificial no tiene la culpa, el problema es el texto original. Una buena edición habría evitado esta cacofonía usando sinónimos o reestructurando frases. Lástima, porque la historia prometía, pero la experiencia en audio arruina todo.