The Vicious Female Supporting Actor Tearing Up the Cannon Fodder Script
[Sister chapters of the Quick Wear series, 1v1!!!] I, Li, have always only written 1v1 Double-Clean, Qiangqiang, Two-Way! I'm asking if it's a 1v1!]
It was said that a furball under the Divine Master had run away after teasing the Heavenly Axiom.
While escaping, he did not forget to take away the system that was regarded as a " taboo ".
Other people did missions for resurrection, revenge, and benefits.
[Li Huan's Mission: Kill Time]
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The Prince Regent, who had the most power in the country, pressed his forehead against hers and interlocked his fingers. His voice was very soft but very serious.
"Huan 'er, I like you. I like you very much."
The refined and scummy sickly brother hooked her little finger and smiled kindly.
"You can either marry me or be locked up by me for the rest of your life. Choose one."
The dark and stubborn Demon Lord touched her crippled leg, his eyes extremely gentle.
"Don't run, you're all I have."
……
Look.
Although these people were occasionally seriously ill, they were much better than the one in the void.
There were so many men in the world that Li Huan decided not to go back.
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Suddenly, one day, a certain system burst into tears.
" Host, you should quickly escape. Sob, sob, sob."
"What are you running for? I haven't had enough fun yet."
A certain system had nothing to live for.
" The system has just detected that the person who is clinging onto you in every plane is the same person. It's the one in the void."
Li Huan was speechless.
If he didn't run now, when would he?
A certain man grabbed the back of her neck.
"Where are you going? She's already asleep and the kiss is over. What else do you want?"
Help!
Why is this person haunting us?
Mi crítica a esta novela va más por el lado de la edición que de la trama, aunque en realidad sería error del autor. El autor abusa de los signos como este _________ hasta el hartazgo. Parece que cada capítulo tiene que tener. En papel quizá pasa desapercibido, pero en audiolibro es un suplicio. El bot las lee bien, pero la repetición constante de ese sonido cortante hace que sea molesto y hasta cansado de escuchar. Hay personas que estamos haciendo otras cosas (cocinando, trabajando) y no podemos estar todo el tiempo leyendo, por eso usamos el audiolibro. Pero con esa repetidera, en lugar de disfrutar la historia, terminas desconcentrándote o frustrándote. El narrador artificial no tiene la culpa, el problema es el texto original. Una buena edición habría evitado esta cacofonía usando sinónimos o reestructurando frases. Lástima, porque la historia prometía, pero la experiencia en audio arruina todo.