Ghosthand Alchemist
Jiu Yu was the top-notch apothecary of the modern Dark Clan Pavilion. He was regarded as a thorn in the flesh by the people in the sect. In the eyes of outsiders, he was a legendary figure who existed like a god.
He died in an accident and was reborn in another world.
With her arrival, the truth of the slander that had been planned for a long time by her predecessor came to light!
From then on, fate began a stunning legend that belonged to her!
Once the hero drew his sword, it would be another ten-year tribulation for the common people.
He stepped on living beings, and his hands were on life and death. Those who despise my relatives and friends should be killed. Whoever kills my companions, destroy him.
A pair of ghostly hands could refine top-grade immortal pills, cure the dead, fight the heroes of the world, and flirt with peerless beautiful men!
With him, a flower, a world, a leaf, a pursuit, a song, a sigh, a lifetime of one person!
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