The evil villain always wants to monopolize me
The Moon Breeze couple failed to recruit system administrators, so they dragged a certain cold-faced fatty to the 3,000 Small Worlds, intending to save all kinds of villains.
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"Sister, I won't take revenge. Can I hug you?"
Vicious villain: "Ah Yue, if you dare to leave…I-I'll kill myself!"
Tsundere villain: "Hmph, no matter how powerful you are, you still can't leave me…I'm the one who can't leave you!"
Domineering Villain: "Moon Breeze, you're mine…I was wrong. I'm yours, alright?"
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Moon Breeze smiled dotingly.
Various villains (nodded obediently):"Yes, yes. I won't turn evil because of you."
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Sang Lijun: I was originally in the abyss, but I met that radiant god. From then on, the wind and moon were all for her.
Nine Regions Moon Breeze: I'm a god, you're a demon. Although gods and demons don't exist on both sides, it's good that you and I fuse.
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(Super Big Boss VS Various Villains, 1v1, Double Clean, Double Strong, Female Attacks, Sweet Pet, if you don't like it, don't shoot around.)
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Bueno ,no voi a decir mucho ,pero ai partes en las que puedes mejorar , como por ejemplo , la parte donde lleva a sus familiares al cine ,alli tenias que explicar un poco mas las reacciones de sus padres al verlo actuando algunas de las esenas de la pelicula por ejemplo , como se sintieron : imprecionados ,aterrados , nerviosos etc, para darles una inprecion mas completa de como se sintieron sus familiares al ver la pelicula ya que en la historia se siente como si le cortaras un troso del texo , o saltaras esas esenas que arian a uno sumergirse en las impresiones de los personajes al ver la pelicula