terkuak perlahan

TIKAM SAMURAI

Dimas_Pratama

2022-08-29

Untuk segi cerita disajikan sudah bagus. Penokohan karakter dapat. terutama Yuki karakter yang kuanggap sebagai lemah. Tapi perlahan-lahan mulai terkuak misterinya. Termasuk dia kembali ke masa lalu untuk perbaiki nasib. Gak mudah memang. Tapi disitulah ujian sesungguhnya Yuki dimulai. Salut dah dengan pembawaan unik antara thriller dan scifi Agak sayang dengan terganggunya banyak typo, tanda jeda dan baca belum diedit. Belum lagi penggunaan titik tiga (...) kurang tepat.

AMNESIA*

NayI · Sci-fi

23 Chs

Daoist158875

2019-06-21

Perlahan tapi pasti . 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

Dahulu, Aku Mencintaimu

Ye Fei Ye · Urban

1074 Chs

Mijun_123

2021-06-07

Arjun yang lemah, perlahan bangkit. Saya suka sekali sama pengembangan karakter tokohnya, Kak. Seperti Arjun ini yang dulunya lemah, kini perlahan bangkit

Black Dark

Zanaka · Urban

371 Chs

Ain_Latifah

2019-09-23

Dibab ini mulai terkuak siapa golden sebenarnya dan apa motifnya menolong calista aq suka ini😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞

Dendam dan Cinta Palsumu

Liie_ · Fantasy

5 Chs

Pirates: Shadow of the Craft

" Luo Xiu, we agreed on three years back then. Three years later, another three years. If this continues, we'll soon become the Four Sovereigns!" "Lu Qi, can you be nicer to me? Do you believe that I'll burn your information tomorrow and make you a pirate for the rest of your life?" From being a CP0 agent to the king of the world, Rashu used all his resources to complete one world scam after another! ...... "You're asking who we are?" "If the navy doesn't dare to kill, I will kill. If the navy doesn't dare to interfere, I will interfere. In short, if the navy can interfere, I will interfere. Is it clear enough?" Roxiu turned around. His long robe was blown up by the sea breeze. He chuckled with his hands behind his back." This is how we do things!"

Feng Luo has no regrets

· 5.9K Views

[Heaven-defying Comprehension: I'm fooling the Heavenly Laws in the chat group.]

Mo Lang had been reborn on the Blue Star, and ten years before the arrival of the foreign land, he had received a gift from the main star and obtained heaven-defying comprehension. He had also joined the group of protagonists in the heavens, only to discover that they were all young big shots. In order to fool him, he, who had top-notch comprehension, decided to pretend to be a big shot… The young Huangtian Emperor said," Boss, you're awesome. I just had an idea. You directly perfected the ❮ Self-Transformation Technique ❯ for me?" The young Heavenly Emperor Ye thought, I just got the 'all' riddle, and you've deduced all nine secrets? Big Boss, teach me! The young Xiao Yan: A powerful Dou Technique could be formed from the fusion of Heavenly Flames? Li Qiye: Can you deduce who stole my sheep? Young Tang San: Big brother, I beg you, help me deduce! Mo Lang,[Fantasy Sewers, stand aside!] Just like that, when the Outlander Realm descended, everyone panicked. Mo Lang stood up and said,"It's alright, I'll help." The foreign boss thought, F * ck…Run! The Ancestral Star is too terrifying!

Candle Snake

· 7.2K Views

My game character is the boss

In the future world, resources were scarce, and virtual reality games became the most mainstream. NPCs with self-awareness leveled up quickly like players. Players with NPC panels enjoyed their second life. Jiang Han was a new boss. He didn't have any skills. All he had was a pay-to-win ability that could consume gold coins.

The soul is long dead

· 6.7K Views

Half-returning Song

The unruly and willful eldest daughter of the Xie family, Xie Ning, thought at first glance that Xiao Jingyu was really a peerless talent. At second glance, she thought that he was like a sesame seed looking at a mung bean, a turtle looking at a turtle, and fire and water were incompatible… Ever since Xie Ning saved a pretty boy, she thought that he was a cute little puppy that could be subdued. However, who knew that this pretty boy was more cunning than anyone else? From then on, Xie Ning's heart had gone elsewhere… ---- "How are you going to thank me?" "Give yourself to me?" ---- This article has no logic, the story is purely fictional, Mu Zi nine skirts: 773914191

Jiuzimu

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Rise of North Asia

In 1623, Russia had been invading North Asia for 42 years and had already pushed to the Yenisei River. They were repairing the castle and preparing to continue eastward to invade the Baikal Lake area and the Lena River City... In 1623, eight years after the founding of the Later Jin Dynasty, Nurhachi was planning to move the capital to Shengyang despite the opposition of the Baylor ministers... In 1623, three years after the Tianqi Emperor of Ming Dynasty, Zhu Youxiao, ascended the throne, the Dutch warships invaded Fujian and were defeated by the Ming Navy. They turned around and headed for Taiwan... In 1623, the English civil war was imminent. Merchant ships from Spain, Portugal, and the Netherlands were full of gold, silver, jewelry, and spices, sailing on the vast sea in an endless stream… That year, Zhang Tianzhao brought an old steam train back to Lake Baikal… QQ fickle group 46298505.

Autumn waters fill the maple forest

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