even silence bleeds

This Pei GE has a demon for a cousin Sad luck she can not even accept her sisters happiness. My heart bleeds for Pei Ge Shishi is clearly trying to insult her Show her in bad light

Even though my review is low I need to clarify, it’s sole factor that brought everything down is the horrible dialog. It bleeds together with the surrounding descriptions and makes it very hard to understand. Otherwise this is a good story and a fun fanfiction!

Dark, ruthless, gripping — Wings of Ashfall bleeds secrets, shadows, and merciless justice.

i have read it quite a bit, i rarely review this early in the chapters but i think i should do it now as i am afraid i may not be able to read this. as of now the author stretched the concept of silence fruit so thin might as well call it stop fruit, for god sake he called fruit of stillness, that alone already destroyed the identity and the concept of silence. silence fruit does not stop vibration to remove sound, rather silence fruit stop the production of sound meaning it has no reason to vibrate at all. so vibration did not really stop but can't produce vibration to mute sound. i mean if the author really wanted to expand the silence fruit he could just added that not only does silence fruit silences sound but information, that alone can potentially make rosinante reach or even surpass yasopp specially if you added the three types of haki in the mix. just this make it interesting and accurate. i really hope the author can pull off something oda did with luffy's "gum gum" fruit w1ith rosinante's current "silence silence fruit" or as the author calls it fruit of stillness.

Don't stop writing this! Even if the contest is over keep going this is so freaking cute I am dying from nose bleeds! 😀😀😀😀 I need more Alex and his awkwardness!!! Keep up the good work and don't let anyone bring you down.