bab jaring jaring misteri

😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 males banget kalau sudah memasuki bab yang penuh intrik...Tuan Lu, segeralah bawa Xiao Xi , keluarkan Xiao Xi dari jaring jaring jahat dari keluarganya sendiri...Xiao Xi tidak seharusnya menerima kehidupan yang tidak adil ini...

I really wanted to like this but the story development is jaring at times and all over the place and mc fails to make use of the system combined with the obvious use of ai in parts of the novel this has disappointed me as I have enjoyed the authors other works

Is this even yuri been reading a bit of it and seems to be more a guy who cross-dresses not a girl, not sure if this changes in the future but seems unlikely to be yuri. One big issue with the writing is a line break at every comma, commas do no get new lines and are part of the same sentence its very jaring to read when it breaks like that.

i really like this book but i think its written by ai, author claims its not and that all his grammar techniques is because of his college degree, however the story often does its this and like this really often that ai loves to do giving multiple samples of the same thing and it seems to increase as time goes on in a way that feels jaring to read that is so typical of ai.

Aku suka banget cerita yang berbau misteri. itu membawa pembaca untuk ikut berfikir mecahin misteri itu. keren n langsung suka.. semangat kakak lanjutin bab 💪💪