you ll be mine someday

Make this into a visual novel someday please! I can tell that you had a lot of experience in writing and if not then you're just talented. I'll be sticking around to improve mine myself because i feel like i could learn alot from you!

This very nice 😊. Hope mine will bloom someday just like this.. Anyway, this is great work man.

It's nice and enjoyable. It possessed good genre and exciting events but there are still more chapters to come... It's like a poetry I read Witnessed by the Moon High above the farthest skies, Accompanied by the clouds, meteors and stars, Moon of grace, showing off your rays, Recording each pain of sorrowful phase. I want to whisper to stars, I want them to know, i want them to see, I want them to witness my cry and plea, I want to shout, "where's reality?" Oh moon above the heaven and earth, Guide and bestow me your song, Touch her mind, kiss her heart, Let them know that they were wrong. Someday, I'll come, Someday, we'll see, Someday, all will bow, Someday, mine you'll be. Even flesh and blood are against, Nothing can shake my heart and mind, Though separated by thousand miles, Forever and always mine. Even if mountain and seas divide our hearts, We'll share the same stars, We'll share the same clouds, We share the moon. The same heart to loom. By my ever-growing wooden heart, By the touch of your blazing love, Turning me into ash, Flying into the wind, forever whispering. "Starry night, oh starry night, Evening of darkness, I found a light. For there's no distance that can escape your grace, Soon will come, the darkest phase." Let wind blow and feel its touch, Time will tell, if waiting is too much, Listen to silence, after the night, A day will rise, another challenge to fight. Be wise in loving through distance, Let the stars burst in radiance, Until you come for your love to confess, Let the moon be the witness. stillWitnessed by the Moon High above the farthest skies, Accompanied by the clouds, meteors and stars, Moon of grace, showing off your rays, Recording each pain of sorrowful phase. I want to whisper to stars, I want them to know, i want them to see, I want them to witness my cry and plea, I want to shout, "where's reality?" Oh moon above the heaven and earth, Guide and bestow me your song, Touch her mind, kiss her heart, Let them know that they were wrong. Someday, I'll come, Someday, we'll see, Someday, all will bow, Someday, mine you'll be. Even flesh and blood are against, Nothing can shake my heart and mind, Though separated by thousand miles, Forever and always mine. Even if mountain and seas divide our hearts, We'll share the same stars, We'll share the same clouds, We share the moon. The same heart to loom. By my ever-growing wooden heart, By the touch of your blazing love, Turning me into ash, Flying into the wind, forever whispering. "Starry night, oh starry night, Evening of darkness, I found a light. For there's no distance that can escape your grace, Soon will come, the darkest phase." Let wind blow and feel its touch, Time will tell, if waiting is too much, Listen to silence, after the night, A day will rise, another challenge to fight. Be wise in loving through distance, Let the stars burst in radiance, Until you come for your love to confess, Let the moon be the witness. mWitnessed by the Moon High above the farthest skies, Accompanied by the clouds, meteors and stars, Moon of grace, showing off your rays, Recording each pain of sorrowful phase. I want to whisper to stars, I want them to know, i want them to see, I want them to witness my cry and plea, I want to shout, "where's reality?" Oh moon above the heaven and earth, Guide and bestow me your song, Touch her mind, kiss her heart, Let them know that they were wrong. Someday, I'll come, Someday, we'll see, Someday, all will bow, Someday, mine you'll be. Even flesh and blood are against, Nothing can shake my heart and mind, Though separated by thousand miles, Forever and always mine. Even if mountain and seas divide our hearts, We'll share the same stars, We'll share the same clouds, We share the moon. The same heart to loom. By my ever-growing wooden heart, By the touch of your blazing love, Turning me into ash, Flying into the wind, forever whispering. "Starry night, oh starry night, Evening of darkness, I found a light. For there's no distance that can escape your grace, Soon will come, the darkest phase." Let wind blow and feel its touch, Time will tell, if waiting is too much, Listen to silence, after the night, A day will rise, another challenge to fight. Be wise in loving through distance, Let the stars burst in radiance, Until you come for your love to confess, Let the moon be the witness. Witnessed by the Moon High above the farthest skies, Accompanied by the clouds, meteors and stars, Moon of grace, showing off your rays, Recording each pain of sorrowful phase. I want to whisper to stars, I want them to know, i want them to see, I want them to witness my cry and plea, I want to shout, "where's reality?" Oh moon above the heaven and earth, Guide and bestow me your song, Touch her mind, kiss her heart, Let them know that they were wrong. Someday, I'll come, Someday, we'll see, Someday, all will bow, Someday, mine you'll be. Even flesh and blood are against, Nothing can shake my heart and mind, Though separated by thousand miles, Forever and always mine. Even if mountain and seas divide our hearts, We'll share the same stars, We'll share the same clouds, We share the moon. The same heart to loom. By my ever-growing wooden heart, By the touch of your blazing love, Turning me into ash, Flying into the wind, forever whispering. "Starry night, oh starry night, Evening of darkness, I found a light. For there's no distance that can escape your grace, Soon will come, the darkest phase." Let wind blow and feel its touch, Time will tell, if waiting is too much, Listen to silence, after the night, A day will rise, another challenge to fight. Be wise in loving through distance, Let the stars burst in radiance, Until you come for your love to confess, Let the moon be the witness. issing chapterWitnessed by the Moon High above the farthest skies, Accompanied by the clouds, meteors and stars, Moon of grace, showing off your rays, Recording each pain of sorrowful phase. I want to whisper to stars, I want them to know, i want them to see, I want them to witness my cry and plea, I want to shout, "where's reality?" Oh moon above the heaven and earth, Guide and bestow me your song, Touch her mind, kiss her heart, Let them know that they were wrong. Someday, I'll come, Someday, we'll see, Someday, all will bow, Someday, mine you'll be. Even flesh and blood are against, Nothing can shake my heart and mind, Though separated by thousand miles, Forever and always mine. Even if mountain and seas divide our hearts, We'll share the same stars, We'll share the same clouds, We share the moon. The same heart to loom. By my ever-growing wooden heart, By the touch of your blazing love, Turning me into ash, Flying into the wind, forever whispering. "Starry night, oh starry night, Evening of darkness, I found a light. For there's no distance that can escape your grace, Soon will come, the darkest phase." Let wind blow and feel its touch, Time will tell, if waiting is too much, Listen to silence, after the night, A day will rise, another challenge to fight. Be wise in loving through distance, Let the stars burst in radiance, Until you come for your love to confess, Let the moon be the witness.

As a fellow author, I'll rate you 5 stars as you did for mine. Thanks buddy!

This is my favorite novel of yours. It was very unique. I've read it three times already! I hope you'll continue it someday :)