he did his best to control his fate and so did i

I really like this one. At the start the main character was dumb, and didn't fully use the privileges that he got from his system. he should have raised his Int, for example, so that he could do better choices, and get more point through meditation. so it was frustrating. He could have made better choices, but, he did not. But he gets better later on, and that's what I like. His development. His growth. Past the Firsts struggles, the main character becomes somewhat pleasant, and gives you surprises and good times. The other thing I liked was the concept behind all of the story. Control your fate, and go against it. The fate of the primordial human, who should be weak, but overcomes his own fate and controls it. It explains why it's a rare and a formidable power. And why our mc becomes "op".

This is really good. I know that the tag say genius but how long has he been in the dc universe and how did he get the equipment so easily. How will protect his mind or did the cosmic entity which you did not make clear what it was block his mind for any attempt of mind reading and control. Another question is that in this multiverse of DC is this following the comics or shows or mix of both.

Success is achieved either by the best or the worst. the fate of the middles is gray, imperceptible mass, extras on life. The plot looks interesting, now the only question is whether the author will be able to realize his brilliant idea and write a fascinating story, as an average statistical person, without special talents (apparently he had talent, he simply did not know about it and did not develop it) suddenly by the will of fate, he could rewrite your gray future.

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This guy is very wise. To make sure he is the father of the boy he did some test. By the time the resuly came out. He did his best to support the little boy on his little way. He the best the dad.