estelle moves in

updates are a bit slow and sometimes inconsistent but it's fine as long as it's not dropped. grammar is decent. storyline is pretty solid. sometimes estelle questions things she has mentioned before, so it gets a bit repetitive. i think i know estelle's identity, but i might be wrong. it'll be nice to see reina and estelle's personality overlap if you can, because apparently the real estelle contacted her through a dream, so her sould shouldn't be completely gone yet (?) i'll read more of this, will be waiting for updates.. good work, author. good read to pass time with.

Estelle might be the worst character I’ve ever seen, author should’ve killed her from day one, genuinely ruined the novel for me, so I’ll drop ts.

Love this novel. Super thriller n exciting. My fav character is Estelle. Waiting for chap 6, the rebellions might be revealed. I don't like cavalry haha I really hope they don't get married

Oh my! This story has me on chokehold. I feel so sorry for Estelle, the book has only just begun and she's been through a lot already. But I particularly love her chemistry with Roman. I'm here to see it all unfold. Kudos author[img=recommend]

Here's what you can expect, simply based on the author's own review. Writing Quality - Grammers and Spelling are checked before publishing, and, the dialogues are easily distinguishable between 'inner monologue.' and "interaction monologue." Lastly, decent pacing on the paragraphs. Stability of Updates - At most it will follow a schedule of one chapter every month, maybe two or three if lucky. But otherwise, it will update from time to time. (Don't worry if I don't update it. It's not going to be an abandoned work. Just in a hiatus state. Like many of my stories.) Story Development - It follows the progress of the story and any factors are taken into consideration and have consequences in each action. So, it can be expected that 'what goes around, comes around.' in this story. Character Design - The story follows Estelle, and a supporting character - the Tribunus; Numerius - as both character and their legion travel the world of Middle Earth. However, more characters can be implemented from the legions, like a Centurion if the plot requires it. Otherwise, the sole protagonist is Estelle. Further elaboration. Estelle is a prime example of a civilized person, and that she is virtuous and noble. But not generous nor kind, though not cruel or sadistic. In other terms, she is logical and reasonable within reason. World Background - Set in the Second Age, and to be specific; it is based on the show before the Trilogy of, The Lord of the Rings. The Lord of the Rings: The Rings of Power.