alex got shot

I have to say the ratings really got me good for this novel. I had high expectations, but after reading just a few chapters, I was disappointed and it ruined my day. The first two chapters weren't bad, but after he goes to school (like chapter 3 or 4) tasked with the mission of finding a girlfriend, it goes downhill fast from there. The MC, Alex, finds a random girl he bumps into and decides she's the one who will become his girlfriend. We then are led into the classroom where Alex just stares at the girl the whole day, and I LITERALLY MEAN THE WHOLE DAY. The author clearly states that Alex looked at her the whole time in class. Along with some face slapping of the teachers, having Alex answer the difficult questions posed by the teacher for not paying attention in class. Only for the teachers to be ashamed and do nothing but walk away embarrassed. This is the same thing as the young master trope in Wuxia's. The craziest thing of all though, is when the MC stalks our female lead back home and gets taken into custody by police. From there, he starts showing us his skills and engaging with the whole police station (approximately 16+ people) in a shoot-out using live ammo. But the craziest part is how vague everything is. Alex is said to have crawled into the ventilation shaft (how? does he fit? how does he even get to the ceiling where it is?). Then there's this passage, "When Alex got to the entrance of the police station, as expected a dozen officers were blocking the entrance . These officers were serious they held real guns now and were ready to use deadly force on Alex . When Alex got close enough they opened fire, Alex calmly hid behind the front desk . Before Alex got behind the front desk he was able to determine the positions of all the officers . Alex started calculating under the torrent of bullets . Alex reloaded first, then he aimed his handgun at the wall . BANG!, BANG!, BANG!, BANG!, BANG!, BANG!, BANG!, BANG!, BANG!, BANG!, BANG!, BANG! Alex shot at the wall and the rubber bullets ricocheted off the wall . After hearing all of his bullets hit their targets Alex calmly stood up and walked out of the front door . All the police officer in the police station that were present had all been subdued ." I mean like this is even more crazy than your usual Wuxia novels 😂. Then, after this happens, we get a scene of our main female lead getting Stockholm syndrome for the MC. Like hello? I don't know how anyone got past 10 chapters of this; it's like a fever dream of a 12-year-old.

I see the writing quality improving after every chapter. It really gets good, especially after Alex waving Luffy goodbye which kind of “inspired” luffy to be pirate king as well. It parallels with the interaction of Robert and Alex when Alex was younger. I look forward to more chapters ! (maybe a filler one on how Makino and Franco got along well but thats just me)

I like it it's a great GOT fic so I'd say give it a shot

do be honest at first i like the story until the mc got shot this is just personal opinion the story is good if you don't mind mc getting shot/hurt I personally don't like weak mc overall the story is good and give it a try if you can bare the mc is weak at beginningdo be honest i want the robber to be dead... I stopped reading at 4 chapters more after the mc got shot so i don't know if the robber got what he deserves