I have a bunch of players on Earth
Player: I'm a worker whose monthly salary doesn’t even hit $5,000. My monthly rental already takes up half of my salary, I don’t have a girlfriend and is reprimanded by my superior every day. However, I feel very happy because there has been a new virtual game recently. In the game, I have a powerful bloodline. Not only do I have my own fleet, I even have a powerful overlord that granted me a colonized planet. Although I know this is fake, but inside there, I found the meaning of my life!
Actually...the overlord who gave him the planet really wanted to tell him that this game wasn’t fake. (You really have your own fleet and colonized planet…) but the overlord knew that he couldn’t say this. Because, once he said it, these subjects who thought of themselves as ‘players’, would definitely not be as terrifyingly hardworking as now!!
The Seventh Magic Cube · Games
The premise of the story is very interesting, but the development of the story leaves much to be desired. It's fine that everyone feels distrustful of the MC because of his powers, but they're going a bit overboard, as if the MC were the only one with mind control powers. After all, there are sirens in Nevermore, and they are also treated with some distrust because of their powers, so it would make more sense for the MC to join that group instead of striking up such a quick and close friendship with Enid. The story really has potential, but everyone gives too much importance to the MC being the descendant of the Pied Piper of Hamelin, as if mermaids didn't exist. If you made a change and made the MC the descendant of Val Helsing, the monster hunter, then the behavior of all the students towards the MC would make more sense. As a final note, all the chapters feel oversaturated with AI or were completely generated by AI.