Fang Heng was transmigrated to a parallel world and his soul was forced into the body of a man who had just committed suicide. Huh? What? Every human here was being forced to join a game? Those who refused would be killed? Wait? This suicide dude was a pro gamer? He had the highest S-rank talent sill, the Zombie Clone? Damn! The S-rank skill evolved! My zombie clones could auto hunt! [Your zombie army has crafted Wooden Axe x720 when you were offline. You have received 1921 experience points for the Basic Crafting skill.] [Your zombie army has chopped down 27,821 trees and gathered 128,973 pieces of wood while you were offline. You have received 2,171,921 experience points for the Basic Wood Chopping skill.] Just as the rest of the players were struggling to survive in the zombie apocalyptic game, Fang Heng's zombie clones were starting to clear every resource out of the forest. Hm... What an interesting game!
Hi the Gaji I love your story a lot and just decided to write this to try to help you. Your Writing is amazing and doesn't need to be changed but sometimes I feel that you force a certain mood in a game. You could write more non scoring possessions to help with that and not only highlight possessions. Other than that I like the overall appeal of your story Also I plan to make my own basketball story soon inspired by your story. And I have a question on how you create characters and their abilities on the court like how did you make Udonis's or Trell's playstyle. If you can message me if you know how too if not review a nonsense novel I made.