through mud and blood based on a true story

I just want to say this you do know that calling someone mud blood is extremely offensive and racist in the Wizarding community it’s like dropping the n bomb I’m not sure it’s a good title

Michael and ashlyn, a dynamic duo who come from humble low class backgrounds fight their way to the top of the class system through excessive amounts of blood sweet and tears to achieve their true potential

the MC is an unlikable hypocrite, his character development is done horibly and reads as such, while the world is interesting the characters... specificly the MC pulls the setting through the mud

I gave it 5 stars because author is trying and doing a fine job, but there are things that bug me greaty like bloodline (pure, half, mud) being a representation of power while we all know most powerful charcaters are half blood.

I have to write a review to Rate it. And it has to be a long one too. So I decided on how to make a mud pie. You get mud. You get pie. You put mud in pie. Tada! Mud pie.