Starting as a Son-in-law to Establish an immortal Family
In the realm of immortal cultivation, Lu Changsheng traversed as a peasant youth, overlooked by a celestial sect. Yet, endowed with the Multitude Progeny System, he could earn rewards by propagating his lineage, nurturing offspring.
Thus, Lu Changsheng began his journey by marrying into a cultivation family, embarking on a path of intrigue, networking, and fostering descendants to expand his family's cultivation legacy.
As the cycles of time passed and epochs changed, countless supreme beings in the realms of immortality, formidable figures in the demonic path, revered saints among the demon races, and peerless beauties rose and fell, fading into the river of years.
Only Changsheng's family endured, immutable through the ages, perpetually existing, towering atop the path of immortality, sharing longevity with the heavens and earth, radiating brilliance akin to the sun and moon.
Heavenly Strings Painting Pillars · Eastern
This is a review of the first chapter. The first chapter can be read as a stand-alone short story. The protagonist, an older sister, is attacked by the supernatural when her family is out of the house. The are some grammar issues. The word Police is misspelled. The wrong verb tense is used. This work would be improved by editing and expanding the story.