agriculture short story

I enjoyed the story so far. I like story that has to do with agriculture but there are not a lot with this theme. Author please continue to write this story to completion.

This novel is very different to other stories but it took my attention and I'm curious what would happen next! Anyway, the writing quality of this story is good however there is some grammatical errors but I think the author is doing his best to improve the writing quality of the novel. I think the author focuses on the details in agriculture and this would be more interesting if there are some scenes about the main character's background and other supporting characters (and why they are in an agriculture field) while introducing agriculture to the readers. In that way, the readers would be familiar with agriculture knowledge instead of forgetting the terms while reading throughout the story. Although, I'm still on chapter 3 so I still don't know about the next chapters. But that's just my suggestion and it would be always the decision of the author how would their novel would turn out to be. Good luck author! Will continue to read this story. :)

I would like the writer to move to another side of the story, not only wars, for example, the level of education in the country, trade and agriculture more, it will be more fun

The story is very entertaining to the reader and hope that food that main character introduced has a big impact to the world. There a nice development with character growing in agriculture on framing and clothes.

The translation is on point, the characters have personality, and I like the unique power of mc, but I didn’t like the God of Agriculture thing out of nowhere. And even if his martial soul worked this way, I still fells it breaks the world too much. Like, if your martial soul is dirt, then it should be about dirt manipulation or plantation, but espiritual agriculture and Elf creation… I guess it works? But until now, the story has a good pace and new chapters are coming everytime.