The hearse with the weird odor slowed to a stop before the entrance. The sound of pebbles could be heard bouncing on the ceiling. There were footsteps coming from the corridor, and there seemed to be someone sawing next door. The door knob to the room rattled slightly, and the faucet in the bathroom kept dripping even though it had been screwed shut. There was a rubber ball that rolled on its own underneath the bed. Wet footsteps started to surface one after another on the floor. At 3 am, Chen Ge held a cleaver in his hand as he hid beside the room heater. The call he was trying to make was finally answered. "Landlord, is this what you meant by 'the house can be a little crowded at night'‽"
The writing quality started off ok the first 10 chapters and then proceeded to collapse into the gutter. Repeat paragraphs randomly, long author notes that are counted in the word count, various inconsistencies where one moment the assassin is buried outside Sophia's house and the next they are buried outside his house. It's more akin to a stream of consciousness type of writing later on that nobody bothered to edit. We know nothing about this world either other than it seems to be a modern day setting. The premise of the story has promise but it's fundamentally a rough draft that needs several rounds of editing.