a very dangerous game short story

The author have a very good story line but is just that the chapters are very short and a much as tobacco smoking is dangerous to health it was as if the story seen nothing wrong with it because every chapter talk about how ML hold cigarettes and smoke it

major flaw how do they dive in the game? they just lose consciousness then bam!! they are inside the game! if you can think just a little bit. the game is dangerous

- the world history is very deep - game elements, reincarnation, virtual reality, cultivation, level system - the characters has no charm - game time is too short

Story was decent but needed more substance. It was a little short and could of used more description, but due to this being based of a game you played it is was very good.

this is such an amazing book. It is really a game changer. You all will never regret reading this book. I really love the story of little lamb and the dangerous Alpha. 🥰❣️