outside sales horror story

This story has some promise, with a unique power system and a main character that can think outside the box. Unfortunately, even as a complete layman, I can spot some rather large holes in the author's knowledge of the care and sales of fish.

I wasn't going to double review, but I thought I'd share this story I doodled out in the comments for you. It was late at night. Zeref had just closed up when he heard heavy footsteps outside. *Stomp stomp stomp*; then they stopped - right outside the bar doors. "Hello...?" He called out; but it was quiet; with just the pitter patter of rain outside. (Wait, rain...?) His eyes widened in horror. It wasn't raining. It was... Oh it's done. 140 characters reached.

👍Walk in dealer =8 Proses leasing =2 Approve leasing =1 Cash =3 Total sales : approve leasing + Cash =4Walk in dealer =8 Proses leasing =2 Approve leasing =1 Cash =3 Total sales : approve leasing + Cash =4

Do NOT read this when it is dark outside! This book is seriously frightening sometimes. Quality horror + system = quality content. Very similar to the original novel that builds dungeons with pandas. Loving it right now and glad to support it.

Really interesting! Supporting my buddies excellent new work! It may be just for fun - because it is a really fun read! Now to overcome the barrier called 140 words minimum. Here's a story. It was late at night. Zeref had just closed up when he heard heavy footsteps outside. *Stomp stomp stomp*; then they stopped - right outside the bar doors. "Hello...?" He called out; but it was quiet; with just the pitter patter of rain outside. (Wait, rain...?) His eyes widened in horror. It wasn't raining. It was... Oh it's done. 140 characters reached.