agile game development user stories

The plot armor is so bad in the beginning like the guy have 80 agile and goblin had 10,000 agile. he faster then goblin so how. The grammar is bad in beginning but the author say later it get better. so it less then three star for me.

The storyline presents an interesting take on the relationship between a game and a user. I find it to be fast paced and quite immersive, it's though as you read you as the reader become caught up in the game just like An Jianxin. A very good read I will say.

The title of this book is a bit weird. DXD: God of Gamers, wouldn’t it be a better title if instead of Gamers, you switch it to Game. Because being a god of gamers mean that there are multiple gamers ability user and you are at the top or at least worship by them. Being a god of game would mean that you are a god of game, governing gaming.

Have u play or watch or even read Basara? Do you know that the loid ass red suited spiky hair boi? Yes The dual spear user Yukimura has enter the game, not him actually its just the special class of MC in the game.

writing quality needs some improvement some scenes and paragraphs dont flow smoothly with the abrupt scene changes, story development is too fast character design really needs some work so far, characters dont feel like people and are only there for the sake of it or just to move the plot, world building is so far okay with the language. the problem with system novels is the authors make their combat or even the usefulness of skills identical to a game even though the setting of their story is the real world(obviously not our real world but the world where mc lives) and not in a game world, in most system novels you use the skill fireball and a preset fireball appears unable to be adjusted by the user making it so that the user doesn't have full grasp of his skills, but in magic novels you use the skill fireball the user can freely manipulate the fireball in any way user sees fit which is obviously a lot better because he can use a any kind of power of the fireball for the situation user is in. the MC doesn't even explore his skills or use it to the fullest, for example perfect energy control when you hear "perfect energy control" you imagine the mc freely manipulating energy fluidly making it do things how he sees fit, but instead the mc asks the system to adjust it for him to basic level