Sensational! Fake Noble VS Real Genius
[1v1 pure love + transmigration + ancient martial arts + highly pampered by disguise group + mysticism + entirely fictional universe]
Gu Zhiqi transmigrated into the role of the vicious female antagonist.
The heroine was a true heiress with numerous disguises, while she, usurping the nest of others, constantly framed the heroine, and in the end, tragically received her 'boxed lunch' as the fake heiress.
Gu Zhiqi: Even transmigration can't stop me from retiring!
However, transmigration couldn't, but poverty could.
Master Zhi was forced into business!
...
#Breaking! Gu Family's fake heiress, Gu Zhiqi, kicked out and now swindling money as a fortuneteller under a bridge#
The protagonists' group style started to go awry.
Eldest Brother Gu: Need money? Take this neighborhood.
Second Brother Gu: Second bro gives you an entertainment company.
Third Sister Gu: Just made a billion, keep it safe.
Fourth Brother Gu: Young master's championship prize money, take it.
Money-loving heroine: Need money? Pick any color card you like.
Biological brother: Come back to inherit the family fortune.
Gu Zhiqi: "..." Huh? What happened to the vicious female antagonist script?
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#Breaking! Everyone in the Gu Family is a top player in their fields, except the fake heiress who's nothing but a pretty face#
And then, the big shots started calling one after another.
First Big Shot: Our alliance's ancestral site doesn't have better feng shui than under a bridge? Master Gu, reconsider?
Second Big Shot: Need money? Think about that last order.
Third Big Shot: Have time for fortune-telling, but no time to write papers?
Fourth Big Shot: Miss Gu, I have a surgery here, what do you think...
...
Gu Zhiqi: Read, retiring, do not disturb.
A certain movie star: You just used my account.
Gu Zhiqi, who had swindled enough money to retire, "..." ?!
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1/5 Honestly, this fanfic had a lot of potential, but the author completely wasted it by trying to force too many different ideas together. The story would have been much better without the entire demon and ghost plot. I don't mind the protagonist having unfair advantages because of his past lives, but turning a story about Hollywood into a supernatural world was a terrible decision. The biggest problem is that the fanfic doesn't know what it wants to be. It doesn't focus on cultivation even though it has cultivation elements. It doesn't focus on the supernatural despite the presence of ghosts and demons, and it doesn't even properly focus on Hollywood despite that being the main appeal of the title. Instead, it feels like several completely different stories were mixed together without any real balance. To make things worse, the author also decided to alter the world by changing the names of many actors and directors. You can clearly tell that these characters are supposed to be real actors or actresses, but they have completely different names for no real reason. This creates an unnecessary mess because the reader has to constantly figure out who each character is supposed to represent. It feels like a forced change that only makes the story more confusing. This is honestly a huge waste of potential. A normal Hollywood setting with the same characters, real names, and without all these unnecessary supernatural elements would have worked much better. A rewrite that removes all these pointless additions and focuses on the Hollywood aspect would definitely be welcome.