enderman love story

It's a great story, no doubt, from the character development to the plot. A great author. Thanks to you too, Translator, for having all these stories.

this is the best adaptation of minecraft's physics and lore I've seen. great worldbuilding. I hope to see more of this as the story just sucks you in. Would love to see more of the enderman.

The one thing that mattes the most of a nonhuman fanfic/story is keeping the mc nonhuman. Ya see, changing your mc into looking like or being human-like is the bane of any good nonhuman novel. We didn’t come her to find a human, we didn’t come her to find a half-nonhuman, the one thing we came for and was assured of in the synopsis is the nonhuman part. Now that you know why your readers bothered to open the novel, we get to the reason this novel is terrible. Mind you this could be the most well written novel in all of history but it’d still be trash. You turn your mc human-ish and remove the part and staple point for the creature you based it off. He’s no longer an enderman, he’s just a transformed human. You didn’t give the viewers a good reason to stay. You remove the looks, remove the preset expectation, and then you moved on. You said enderman and you removed the enderman. I know you’re gonna look at this and wonder why I’m not reviewing the rest of the story but honestly this one point completely overshadows any other complaint. You can’t create a novel about let’s say a dragon, then remove the dragon and move on with the novel. That’s not how stories work. Now I don’t like harem novels at all, think they’re about as useless as the people who read it(completely background side-characters) but I’d rather read that abomination of a disease that plagues webnovel than read this. This is like those gta 5 YouTubers who say “like and sun for a giveaway” but never give the stuff away, you said enderman in the synopsis but 20ish chapters in he’s no longer enderman. He doesn’t have the iconic look of an enderman and he removed the main standing point that Minecraft gave that species. Just write a normal HP fanfic and don’t label it as something you never follow through on. 5 -> 3 -> 1 -> 1 -> 3 on the ratings bottom to top

This looks a lot like one of those mass-produced Chinese fics where except for the MC who has information on his past lives, the whole world is completely stupid and can't figure out some obvious and basic information on his own. Some examples in the first few chapters are how a Runner (tower player) was attacked by an enderman and thought it was another Runner. In 5 years of the tower it was to be expected that at least the monsters in the tutorial were all well known!!! Another thing is that I can't believe that even after 5 years in an obviously game-based world, with health bar and all, nobody but the MC has tried to see if there is an inventory or crafting function, killing an enderman or stealing a bow of the hand of a skeleton. Conveniently the MC was the first person in the world to kill an enderman, on the same day a guild tried to do the same and the MC was the first to try to steal a bow from a skeleton.