Five Elements of E-Sports: Wood Lacking, I Lose You
The first time we met was when we were 13 years old.
Song Nan is thirteen, Qin Sen is fifteen
Qin Sen's first impression of Song Nan was Song Nan sitting on a stone block, crossing her legs and looking at the high school student in front of her. Behind her stood a middle school girl with twin ponytails.
Song Nan's first impression of Qin Sen was that he was a good student, a shining school hunk standing on the podium.
The second time they met was on the plane.
Song Nan had seen Qin Sen's face countless times in the video, but he was dumbfounded on the plane. After five years, he had become taller, more handsome, and thinner.
Qin Sen's impression of Song Nan was that she was still beautiful, but her temper was much more restrained.
The three things that Qin Sen admired the most about Song Nan in his life were:
play esports
marry him
He fought five high school hooligans alone and finally won the principal's banner.
"Hey, Sister Nan! Why are you called Song Nan?"
Song Nan only replied with two words when he heard Jian Yangyang's voice.
"Five Elements, Wood Deficiency."
"Hey, you and Captain are the same fortune-teller, right? Captain also lacks wood!"
At this moment, Qin Sen had just walked out of the kitchen with ginseng tea in his hand.
At this moment, a WeChat message appeared on Song Nan's phone:
Almighty Qin said,[What a coincidence. If that's the case, I need you.]
Song Nan: [???]
This could be a really good story but it is being held back majorly with word count inflation, repetition, rewording of the same information given before, and this happens for many chapters on end. In fact you have to read a lot of chapters to get to anything that moves the story forward and is not simply word count inflation. I finished the free chapters and don’t think it’s worth paying for the locked chapters because of the issues. If these issues didn’t exist, this would be an interesting read because the MC is mature, the world building has hints of interesting mechanics, and there is more realism than you see in these types of stories. Very disappointing that a good story is being handicapped by fluff and wordcount inflation.