enormous success story

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has enormous potential ... I like the way he develops the story. much better than the previous version. <140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140>

The story had enormous potential, but it was destroyed. From chapter 1~17, 12 chapters are 100% disposable. The main character should reincarnate facing the numerous difficulties, including psychological problems of being trapped in a newborn's body until adolescence, and show the enormous advantages and disadvantages of that time, until the beginning of the military campaigns. I expected a lot from this story, but it's a waste of time.

Intelligent narrative with enormous time spent in construction. This time could be more meaningful to produce a good novel.Intelligent narrative with enormous time spent in construction. This time could be more meaningful to produce a good novel.

Is a very good story that happens in an enormous world. I think that can be better because sometimes in a chapter doesn't happen anything but is a very good story