end game in someone's story

Its tagged video game because at the end of the novel, it will dawn on us that after everything, it was just someone playing a video game with story mode and easy mode on

Your writing is pretty much very fluid, the story is amazing and the way how you fit Alucard's in game quote at the end was just perfect, I'd say you do need someone to proofread it or you could do it yourself, other than that. Awesome story!

Loving the Author's take on a video game from the perspective of someone not the original MC of the game.

The story is good and the suspense is actually thrillling? But what's more the entire novel could be made into a good horror game. If only someone would.

I only got through 12 chapters. So take the review for what it’s worth. The mc of this story is supposed to be someone who is reborn into the game world prior to the game going live. The mc is someone who was involved in the end battle between the game company and the resistance. This premise sets the character up as being a high level character who should know a lot about the game. What we get however is someone who seems to be fumbling around without a clear goal. Don’t worry though because almost every chapter he wants to plan what he is going to do. This story has a similar premise to legendary mechanic but unfortunately doesn’t hit the mark to keep readers interested. Many chapter comments say “boring”. I have to agree and it is primarily because the mc is bumbling around like someone who is playing the game for the first time in their life with a pro friend giving him hints on things to make his life easier like how to develop skills instead of being a veteran player himself. I had high hopes but I’m gonna pass on the rest of this one.