rhino conservation success story

Classic conservation of competence. The mc is the only one who isn’t an idiot. He’s not particularly smart it’s just everyone else is dumb. It makes the story boring.

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Well, the concept/idea is good but it needs work. my suggestions : 1: use tags. reincarnation, transmigrattion, avatar etc and more tags. 2: Make a longer and detailed sypnosis 3: make the personality more real, the interaction / conservation real. Emotions, give them emotions, along with atmosphere. There is no proper tension there. 4: and use ai a bit less, at least the conservation, thinking and plot part. GOOD LUCK

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There is too much conversations like one conservation has lasted for 3 chapters or more. I feel like it's been 12 chapters yet there has been nothing done except conversation