hadley duvall story

Very good story so far, found the characters and the creation of the world intresting. Hadley has an honest and open character. Would read more. Loved it so far.

love the entire book! very happy for ellie and ulie... hope hadley found her happy ever after with nick.🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

I am well pleased with this writer, he is very good at the gradual development of the story, despite the bulky chapters he still managed to give a story that is not watery or boring, one wouldn't get tired of reading. Nice novel, all it needs is a good editor then you are good, I see the future Mario Puzo and Hadley Chase, well done.

In my opinion this novel is pretty good, because its relatively realistic and the world building creates interesting scenes and makes you wonder more about the world Suzie adventures through. Although there are various grammatical issues probably due to translation, the main nitpick I have with this novel is how stupid the characters can be. I've read about 35 chapters and there is still no reason to like Hadley (No redeeming qualities on why she's Peyton's first love besides her being "happy"), and some of Suzie's actions are illogical and sometimes out of character. However, as I said before this novel besides those nitpicks is pretty interesting and I will continue reading and hoping for more chapters.

Hello. Yes. It’s me. The shameless author. And yes, this is absolutely a self-review, so I can stare at a beautiful 5.0 rating and feel accomplished for a few minutes... or days, depending on my mood. This is my first novel here, so expect growth. Not just from the MC but also from me. My writing is leveling up chapter by chapter, maybe? Now, about the story. I'm just gonna info dump you here. If you don't want to see this, just skip it. This is a cultivation series built around Gahum: the will of the world. There are three main paths: Body Gahum – punch harder, survive longer. Spiritual Gahum – borrow power from Anitos and spirit beasts. Word Gahum – weaponized vocabulary. Nobles love it. The power ranks go like this: Timawa → Maharlika → Maginoo → Datu → Bathala And of course, our 10-year-old MC doesn't stay 10-year-old. If you like: Gradual progression Power systems that don't rely too much on numbers but on this author's whim Weak-to-strong arcs jungle aesthetics You might enjoy this. If you’re looking for instant god-mode... This story may hurt you emotionally. Either way, thanks for reading. If you have questions about the ranks, Domains, or why a Datu can’t just nuke an island whenever he wants, ask me. I’m usually online, probably. And yes, I’m absolutely counting this as a legitimate 5-star review. Thank you for reading, and also, leave a good review, you embiciles, I mean good decent people of the world.