chavez revine book story

I already like Jiana Chavez!!! She kind of reminds me of a friend of mine so I was really hooked with the story immediately! Also, The flow of the story is really smooth and I could already tell that this would be a great novel.

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Sua obra é maravilhosa, mas pelo amor de deus posta ela no JoyRead, la vc ainda é pago pelas obras e o sitema de libera caps e bem melhor, esse da webnovel só da poblema e só passamos raiva, faco todos os desafios e chekn diario e nao libera os cap, as chavez somem do nada, muito ruim isso

The premis of the story has potential, especially for those who like OP MCs. The English needs some fine tuning but it is readable and the author has already acknowledged this point. I believe that if the author can sit down and come up with a major problem for the MC to try and fix or a goal to achieve, like one of the Beast kingdoms or a monster from the revine try to destroy the kingdom the MC is currently in, as well as some small problem that can be fixed in just a few chapters, like defeating a stonger monster, joining an academy, clearing a low-level dungeon, etc., then it would be easier to peice together a fuller story line. Author, I hope this story can go far and you have fun while writting it, you're doing great so far.

I only started reading it recently so I want to say what fascinates me to not stop reading it. First of all it's funny to see how he enjoys playing rpg and seeimg it as cultivation. The next thing are my unstoppable hunger of questions: How will he help his mother? Will he revine pills? How will he take revenge for his ex girlfriend and ex bestfriend? Will he go to school? How will he earn money in real life? What else will he do that will fascinate other people? 😂 Last thing... there are stupid enemies who will got face slapped! YES!