book the pixar story

Esta es una historia super buenísima ya lo e recomendado mucho .me super encanta tiene todo para Pixar se con la lectura 😍😍😍😍😍😍👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

I love this story to be frank with anyone reading this. Though I don't think it's going to go on for super long sense, he's almost at the end of the movie (unless he wants to do the spin-offs and sequels). But Passerby, if you would take my request into consideration, could you please do the Pixar verse if you're interested in doing a longer type of story.

This fanfic is so good that I swear on the Pixar Lamp that you'll love it. Though I gotta admit that I might be biased cuz before I found this fic I read another slice of lifeish crossover ff and that shit was ass, which might have made this one seem better. But even if that's the case this fic is still good af.

the story kind of sounds boring the intro has no personality. as the intro just basically admits the MC just steam rolls through the dragon Ball universe. this would be forgivable if you had written an intro that showed the MC personality to be unique or funny or hinted that there was going to be lots of lemon scenes with a pretty good size harem. but I see no indication of that in the intro.

ten chapters of monumental boredom, the MC is bland, the story too, the MC's past with his mother could have been interesting if there was some progress, here it's on the edge of a friend story, with less humor and interesting characters. based on the two comments alone, I guess you delete everything below 5 stars. rather than deleting the "bad" comments, you should rework the story to make it interesting.