a pair of blue eyes ghost story

Nice story. The plots are good ♥ 😍. A slow movement caught my eyes, it's a girl around my age. She has this blue eyes that glows like an ocean and wore a blue dress with cardigal tied around her waist:. Nice description. I'm enjoying this interesting story. Although I'm still in chapter 2.

finally uploading this... blue eyes king peak fiction

I love the story, but it should be much better if the main female character has beautiful and unique features appearance. Example like the female mc should have silver white hair with some strands of blue with pink ends and instead of black eyes it should have purple with pink and blue eyes like that. But other than those, everything is 👌😎

update after so long, this became my best favorite book, even after soo many chapters, there are still some mysteries unsolved and unknown things, mc is getting stronger and stronger, but he cant still compare with old china people, still of his 9 eyes 5 are dead, now he can rebrith unlimited times and go back in time like 40mins to revive others, but still is not enough in some situations, we saw a way, in a fantasy world mc got back in time and he got a second pair of red eyes, and he found a super overpowered way to use the eyes at the end where he fought alone vs top ghost controlers of old china, but it was a fake ghost eye and he didnt keep it, sadly, but i hope he will find other pieces of the ghost eye or maybe some way to duplicate the ghost eye and own it, anyway now they are close to first supranatural war between them and overseas people, they try to drive a ghost boat to their country which is full of ghosts, and like their captains, these people had 15 kings, which were strong too, mc killed a few, their captains died, for now is still in begining, mc ghost powers, he took the ghost flame into his domain, now its full of flames and these flames burn all supranatural, if strong enough and burn enough, these flames can erase ghosts,but they are not strong enough for now, like i said of his eyes, 5 are "dead" like they cant revive his eye ghost anymore and he can use these 5 without worries, he upgraded the ghost child, he made it absorb the echo ghost, and now it can multiply as many times and teleport to mc anywhere and its kinda unkillable, mc still scared of it, but the ghost child should be a slave of his ghost eye but mc is scared not to be overpowered by it, in the fantasy world, mc had no chance vs these old china full attack so he let the ghost child eat the human skin scroll, then ghost child started to eat ghosts cnow he can read future and became realy strong, strong enough to 1 vs all old china people, and almost beat them if not for the old man that mc buried, which had a super strong power that almost deleted mc in the end

owo what an interesting romance~ I am excited for e-ghost and the guy. Tynana is sweet and funny at the same time and the e-ghost Laura complements him. They are quite a pair. Only thing that I suggest is breaking down the long paragraphs into smaller one. It gets monotonous. Goodluck, Author-sama.