game grumps danny ghost story

I can't believe it but I will give a Danny phantom fanfic 2 Star and I'm being generous. Why I don't like this fanfic even though I like Danny phantom series? before I tell you, spoilers alert but it doesn't really matter since you will read it all in 17 chapter and be disappointed as I am. 1: Danny's parents betray him for no good reason but we say okay this is an AU world so his parents are different. 2: Sam and tucker betray Danny but after a twist we find out they have been brainwashed and they have a chip or something like that in their brain. Danny find out but doesn't do nothing for 2 years or so because clockwork told him if he act so soon they might get damaged, a guy with power to control time is helpless and Danny that have a limited control over technology can't do anything. Also Danny is the ghost king and he could easily find someone with technology power to save his friends. 3: the author is trying to show Danny going from a kid that was betrayed and hurt to a monarch of ghost which I can't see it not even after the time skip. 4: everybody iq seems to be lowered in this fanfic. 5: also the big bad enemy that made Danny suffer are bunch of idiots and Danny as the ghost king who commands so many ghosts can't take out a government organisation, I don't care if they have technology to fight ghost, Danny can crush them with numbers or even possess the important people of the government. Also ghost have low-godly healing factor and infinite stamina. 6: also human are just ghost in ghost zone and no ghost can't harm them so it's doesn't make sense ( you know what I'm talking about if you read it.) What I'm trying to say that I'm really disappointed and angry so sorry if i was a little harsh.

So far this story is gold. Really well written and fascinating and interesting the idea of ghost powers of danny phantom. Never imagined that danny phantom powers could be so overpowered. I am enjoying Laura and MC relationship so far and hope it developed more. Great work. 🤘

This is a story about Danny who gets possessed by a soul fragment of Hokage Naruto. The story starts before Danny becomes half ghost. Naruto is the teacher figure here and he teaches Danny to become strong in all ways, physical, emotional and social. Naruto also helps him train Sam and Tucker. Sam becomes the Poison Ivy of the group. Remember the ghost possession of the nature ghost. Tucker becomes the Iron man of the group. The Fenton family already has such tech. Plus Naruto is Hokage Naruto so his world already entered the sci fi era and he gives them the tech from his world. Danny does become half ghost and the others also become half ghosts to boost their powers. Jazz, Maddie and Jack are also relevant and will join Team Phantom once Naruto shows himself to them. Around chapter 60 ish. This is a harem for Danny. Sam, Paulina, Star and Ember. All of them will have their role and powers. Naruto's relationship will be Jazz and maybe Malice. The story in the old version would have tragedy but since I don't want to write tragedy anymore. The new version is a lot more light hearted and has no tragedy or deaths. The old version, Naruto would have died saving Danny. Leaving him with a final boost of his soul fragment. In this version, this fragment of Naruto starts to live in Danny's world as a real person. Naruto isn't dead, so the real Naruto is still in the Ninja world. This is his fragment, a piece of him. This story has pieces from Demonata. American Dragon, Yes Jack Long will appear in the story. I did plan to add Shaman King and Ben 10, but that would be too much. So, its just pieces of Demonata and pieces from American Dragon.

"This story absolutely hooked me! I loved how Danny’s character was explored beyond the show—his powers feel more refined, and his growth feels natural. The way you balance ghost action with emotional depth is amazing. I especially liked how you expanded the Ghost Zone and gave Danny new challenges that really test his abilities and maturity. The pacing is smooth, and the dialogue feels true to the characters. Can’t wait to see what happens next—please keep updating, this fanfic is a gem